Wednesday, August 15, 2012
Letter to (Nick) From Kat
Dear Nick you have a strong voice and strong transistion words. I encourage you to keep using your own emotions to make the paper send the message across. You gave good examples, but however I encourage you expand them a little more. You have an unique way of writing they is some what poetic and sets the content for your paper. Your vocabulary is very mature and shows that your engaged and knowledgable about what you write about. Keep up the good work and keep the same style.
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Thank you! I appreciate the copious amount of complements that you said above. I will try to give more detail and try to elaborate more on the topics that i am trying to convey.
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