In reading your paper Patrick it was very insightful
into what you were trying to get the reader to understand. In putting more
emotion in it made the story very intriguing from the first start. I like how
you relate the book They Poured Fire on Us from the Sky to your own life and
related it to issues that go on today. This made me want to read your paper
more, and to add on to my own thoughts of what I could do in the situation of
the book and the world today. I get the poetic, public figure vibe in reading
your paper and relating it to my own life. I like your stance of not fully
knowing what you would do in the character’s position. Good paper.
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