I like your paper bro you had a
strong intro and a good word choice. You have great idea’s in your paper I didn’t
read the book but I wanted too. You should make more context from the book in
some of your paragraphs. I like how you knew the authors aesthetics and
understand what she is doing because most of the people that read my book couldn’t
keep up. I like how you went deep as fuck
in the last paragraph. I wish you could did that during your whole paper but
you ended it well.
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