Dear Amanda

 

I truly enjoyed your paper. I enjoyed the introduction and how you connected with your reader. I’ve went through similar situations where people I’ve been friends with during childhood have changed.  The evolution of change is epic in life and it’s needed to help build us. I can connect with Sarah because I wasn’t popular in high school and our experience with being under dogs has helped motivate us to pursue what we love. You have connected me to your book and actually want to read it. You sold me on the book and your great writing has done that.