Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Letter to Zane


I really liked the message you displayed in your paper. The way you gave descriptions of the book and did not completely give the book away was also very good. I agree with you on the fact that everyone needs to go read this book because it gives you a different point of view on the world.  I agree with the message that you were trying to get across. I also feel like after reading this book there is nothing in the world that I can’t do. The conclusion truly captured the bulk of your whole paper and re-touched on everything you had previously explained. I thought your paper was inspirational and your conclusion was extremely well written. Good job bro

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