Dear Amanda

 

I truly enjoyed your paper. I enjoyed the introduction and how you connected with your reader. I’ve went through similar situations where people I’ve been friends with during childhood have changed.  The evolution of change is epic in life and it’s needed to help build us. I can connect with Sarah because I wasn’t popular in high school and our experience with being under dogs has helped motivate us to pursue what we love. You have connected me to your book and actually want to read it. You sold me on the book and your great writing has done that.

Letter to Aaron

I like your paper bro you had a strong intro and a good word choice. You have great idea’s in your paper I didn’t read the book but I wanted too. You should make more context from the book in some of your paragraphs. I like how you knew the authors aesthetics and understand what she is doing because most of the people that read my book couldn’t keep up.  I like how you went deep as fuck in the last paragraph. I wish you could did that during your whole paper but you ended it well.

Letter To Patrick

In reading your paper Patrick it was very insightful into what you were trying to get the reader to understand. In putting more emotion in it made the story very intriguing from the first start. I like how you relate the book They Poured Fire on Us from the Sky to your own life and related it to issues that go on today. This made me want to read your paper more, and to add on to my own thoughts of what I could do in the situation of the book and the world today. I get the poetic, public figure vibe in reading your paper and relating it to my own life. I like your stance of not fully knowing what you would do in the character’s position. Good paper.

Dear A

Dear Aaron

I enjoyed your paper and the outlook you gave.  Your introduction is strong and you word choice is good.  Your beliefs on Acknowledging where you come from, gives a strong message to your reader. We are connected to where we’re from it plays a role in our identity.  You also help me understand Sarah. I haven’t read the book, but from your paper I see that she is passionate about her creative writing. Her passion has influenced on how I should strive for my goals. She went to different places and still kept her love for writing alive which is difficult.

anDREW "Barrymore" Fridge (LETTER)

Dear, Drew

Well I would say that you writing skill had really change. You have become more of yourself by explaining about the book, your life, and the world. Plus, you have also when in deep in your writing, because after reading you paper I though I did my COMPLETELY wrong. But any who, keep up the good work and hopefully i would hearing your music in the future.

AMANDA!!!!

Amanda, your introduction was brilliant. Even your first sentence in the paper drew me in. I like the way you didn't bring the book up right away. You kind of set a scene that we all can relate to, because we are all just getting out of high school and becoming adults. I like how you kind of set the order of your paper, you didn't jump around at all. You start off your body of the paper like "the book starts off" I like how you did that.

A letter to Ceeser.

Ceesar you had a good narrative flow and gave plenty of reference to the book. I think you could have gave more connection of the book to yourself. Good job making those references and citing them correctly. only thing i would say be more concious of is your language/word choice. try not to write exactly how you would talk.